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Poem Number 15552
You were already gone
when i woke up this morning
i guess the adage holds true
)never go to bed angry(

Sitting on
the corner of the bed
wishing for all that is wishing
you just went out walking
and decided to carry
most of your possesions just
- for the extra exercise

My toothbrush
is once again a bachelor (though
it didn't do anything to deserve it)

The coffee table looks bare
without the bonsai tree that
you twisted out of copper wire

)sometimes last times
are really last times
and need outweighs hope
(when it comes down to a crime)
one again
there is a mine
and yours
and yours
- is gone
and mine
doesn't even matter
-(


Commentary:
Line 22-once Preston
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excellent expression, smh
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this is good...like the toothbrush part. *grace
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i'm so sad
~haizey
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