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Poem Number 15524
My Love for You***JESS***


Commentary:
We never fight with words
Our love is too strong to pull us down that far
I wish that I could hold onto you more
I wish that every time I look up at the stars
I am just hoping that one day things will be different
and we can be alone more often
saying goodbye to you in front of others
not being able to tell you what I am thinking deep within
Now that we just spent a couple days together
it will be hard to live with out you
but I love you and I will be here waiting
waiting for our love to come true

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I think your poem is aweinspiring. Good Job!
I would like to see more of your poems posted.
I hope you don't mind me commenting in the middle of your poem,
Twyla*
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