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Poem Number 15519
Panes of glass keep me from beauty
2 thick, too thick
and air between - a leap I can't make
if i tried
cause im tired ,of excusses made by the world comeing down on me,im fastened to a state of mind,i know needs changing im tired im lazy,ive become my excuss.i can see right through the glass,and i can


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see right through me like i can through you,we are fake
hidden by our features,what we call to be true.
see that leap through the air can i make?
no its not there,that space between the glass was filled with me.
the glass my eyes,the air my breath,i looked for me.........
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thanks for the beautiful addition
-blue7
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