Look over my shoulder
While I'm screaming from
The mountain
Avert your eyes
But never close them
Saline burns holes in the
Thin air of purity
Desperation sings the soft
Melody of insanity
Like a lullaby with chords
Of disarray
I sleep under pressure
Let me lay my head in your lap
I just want to rest my eyes
and silence the world of cries

i think i've been the screamer before. this reads vividly true
flicker

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I like the feel of this. Nice poem. ~ audee
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thanx.
rage
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addition of the new line works well. good job
flicker