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Poem Number 15488
The Journey
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How long will the journey take?
It'll take seasons and seasons of change.
Will there be smiles or painful heartache?
Whatever you and the fates arrange.
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What scenery on the way will unfold?
Meadows of sun and dark waters deep.
In swirling tides, how will I keep hold?
By love and strong faith, you will reap.
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How will I know when the journey is o'er?
When the heart with memories sings.
Will I find rest at that final door?
Beautiful sleep, that Eternity brings.
Commentary:
Thought provoking poem. Good job. ~ Ed
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Beautiful words...fallon
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yup! beautiful words! :-) ` audee
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Wow! I loved it! ;-) kelly
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Yhank you Ed, fallon, audee, and kelly for your comments. I wrote this in the style of the poem, "UP HILL", by Christina Rossetti. If you get a chance to read it, I think you'll like it. Jane
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