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Poem Number 15478
CONFUSED


Commentary:
Man,exists in time
Adoring a timeless master-
To fall back to
When mind lazy to dissect
While reason made to sit at the back seat
Beleiving in heavenly rulers
To escape hell designed in time
Demeaning millions years of search-
of man's social findings and past
of truths, and the reality
Beating the breast
For his sins committed
accepting chaos-
as a result of his sins alone
while the master waits
with a hell designed
to smother men of evil minds
since hell in time not enough
perhaps a prayer may do wonders!
a praise may stop His punishing hands!
his mercy is unlimited!
for men who repents
Repents for being born!!
He is the ultimate Just
He is the ultimate love
He never does an evil to being
and yet allows evils on men!!
man is created in His own image
Doomed to perish
Clings to Him in fear
For fear is that finally got in man.
a faith in fear
a trust in fear
fear on which the wisdom dwells!
a freedomless freedom
a freedom that made right and wrong.
---
JohnDevv

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yep, god's great, ain't he.
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Live in fear, follow like sheep! Seems hell is here, now! ~ Carmina
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I'd rather be a sheep protected by a shepherd, than a goat with no protector.
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some people eat sheep.
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turkeys and goats too
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that's okay, they are the meat ones, not the symbolic ones.
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