2 b or not 2 b
in 10t b4 c.t.
Re.4.m TV
d.4.m CD
U.c. what I.c?
a.4 n.v., m.n!
O.g. from L.A.
4.king in D.C.
Dazed on b.r or l
(l = L)
+ o.p.m. in t.4.2
D.z. in a t.z
& no 10.aci.t
4.mer leo.9
in t.p. on stick.9
(stick = strick)
& life's 10.tacles

B.c.ng. u!

Before anyone goes nuts, let's see what it is about. ~ Cy
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10 der
in 2 ition
femi 9 abacus
1 dering the orn 8 4 tress
counting.
[tender
intuition
feminine abacus
wandering the ornate fortress
counting.]
poem # 4443
(cinquain form)
re-posted by m (formerly mark)
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m, good inventive idea from you. Since I'd never seen your poem before, do I pay you any Royalty? - Marty
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Marty, no, I am a Brit but I'm not a Royalist :). And don't sweat it, I know you didn't 'steal' the idea, it's just an idea waiting to happen.
A translation of your poem would be useful, btw. There are some parts I can't decipher.
m
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Translation:
To be or not to be
(2 b or not 2 b)
in tent before city
(in 10t b4 c.t.)
Reform TV
(Re.4.m TV)
deform CD
(d.4.m CD)
You see what I see?
(U.c. what I.c?)
afore envy, amen!
(a.4.n.v., m.n.)
Orgy from L.A.
(O.g. from L.A.)
forking in D.C.
(4.king in D.C.)
Dazed on beer or ale
(Dazed on b.r. or l--ell)
plus opium in tea for two
(+ o.p.m. in t.4.2)
Dizzy in a tizzy
(D.z. in a t.z.)
and no tenacity
(& no 10.aci.t)
Former leonine
(Former leo.9)
in teepee on stricknine
(in t.p. on strick.9)
and life's tentacles
(& life's 10.tacles)
Be seeing you!
(B.c.ng. u.!)
---Marty