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Poem Number 15465
Leaving
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in tears in shadows,then meating with so much pain,you say your sorry,i feel the same,im alone in my thoughst,im unable to share ,you know i love you,i feel im in lifes glare,painful
sorrow . laughter topday only cries and heartache tomorrow


Commentary:
Time crawls on its belly
through mazes of grieving;
slips silent as shadows in
the daze of their leaving.
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Years row their slow way across
seas of bereaving;
while loss after loss confirms
there’s no retrieving.
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For time that is vanished can
know no believing;
though sifting through life -
wisdom’s slowly achieving.
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney (R.J.G.)

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once again you give the truth of the heart a song thru your poem...m.e.
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Can feel the pain in this one RJG. Well written. ~ audee
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pianful,true,confusing,so much life involved
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::a tear drops::
~haizeygirl
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You sing, Rosemary, to the last bitter verse...fallon
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Hopefully spelling doesnt count. I loved the poem. It spoke to me
Kimberly A Plasket
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