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Poem Number 15174
Bled Away
---mary ellen
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fallen
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the crushed petals
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in this garden
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out of season
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cry out to the thorned vine
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of it's birth.
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a greater pain
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to lay discarded
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unregarded
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it's beauty bled away
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underfoot.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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mary ellen
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Commentary:
Petals from unusual angle. Nicely done. -= Abe
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Beautiful m.e. Let's hear some more.
~~Cor~~
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I especially like the last two lines. Nice.
rage
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nice...cem
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exquisite! m.e. ~ audee
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very nice --fintan

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so beautiful ~haizey
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