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Poem Number 15174
Bled Away
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fallen
the crushed petals
in this garden
out of season
cry out to the thorned vine
of it's birth.
a greater pain
to lay discarded
unregarded
it's beauty bled away
underfoot.
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mary ellen
Commentary:
Petals from unusual angle. Nicely done. -= Abe
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Beautiful m.e. Let's hear some more.
~~Cor~~
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I especially like the last two lines. Nice.
rage
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nice...cem
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exquisite! m.e. ~ audee
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very nice --fintan
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so beautiful ~haizey
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