Fire endures
---Fapral
Sleep eludes
---Anonymous
Cold water burns
---Anonymous
Pain endures
---Anonymous
~Fapral
---Anonymous
Memory fades
---Anonymous

Ah the sweet agony of a body racked with fever. Believe me, it's not a trip I wish to repeat. I wrote this on the headboard of my bed while I was delirious. What does everyone think? Fapral
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4 short lines tell a lot in neat poem. I like it, Fapral. = Mel
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Good one, Fapral (and good to see you again!), this is very graphic--each word seems chosen with great care! JFC
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been there all too recently, fapral...you poem it well :) *grace
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Much brilliance comes in a tired mind...Bravo
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You're fooling nobody, grumpy.