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Poem Number 14835
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To Be Water~
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Commentary:
If only i could be water,
with it's flowing
veins of liquid
simply
moving as they wish
in search of some new
exploration,
bright skies
always above...
then to be pulled
by suns glow upward
into heavens grasp,
and spit with evident
yet gentle fury
downward into
a spiraling
twisting
wind...
to then start my
journey again,
as i slowly
trickle down
the newly
pinkish
petal of a
rose...
I know that I could
smile,
If only I could be
water.
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)Kaleb
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this is a nice poem, Kaleb. I like the feeling of motion it creates. -jeffh
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great poem,)Kaleb! Stephanie H.
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If only my words could flow as liquid as Kalebs, smh
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This is big beats stopping
red lights
switching to green
and those green
yellowing
then red glow
for a lit up simple man
to appear
with a funny stride
to let some small
big eyed, little voiced
child
hopscotch sing
his way along
the crosswalk

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Kaleb -- love the images flow .... love the feeling too =o) Drm
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Kaleb, me too! I like it! ~ audee
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you always take us on a wonderful journey...m.e.
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