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Poem Number 14817
Open my heart to share your soul
For touching another, helps make me whole
Give me a kiss on lips that tremble
remind me again how are fragrance resembles
sandalwood and leather, a forest in your hair
the excitement and energy of a fresh wild mare.
Let's run with the wind and dance in the hay
And share the sunset and sunrise of glorious days
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Commentary:
This is my first time here and I wanted to join in. Stephanie H.
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Welcome Stephanie H. cem
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Welcome Stephanie. I hope you approve of my additions. -jeffh
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thank you cem for your kind welcome! Stephanie H.
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thank you jeffh! your additions are great! Stephanie H.
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Kiss Me
kiss me to sleep
melt in your arms
for your love I weep
grant me your charms
kiss me to sleep
~~~~~Stephanie H.~~~~~
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Both poems are very good! I especially like the commentary poem though.
)Kaleb
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thanks =) Stephanie H.
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