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Poem Number 14726
Woods on a Winter night
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Commentary:
The carriage rutted the path
of new snow, pristine,
along the wooden fence,
a perfect winter scene,
to pull the horses halt,
and wonder at it all.
The white coverlet
deafens sound beyond
a hoot owl's call.
The bridle bids the
horses to carry home,
but the heart remembers
the beauty on which
we've come.


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Pretty poem. cem
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Very nice, a special winter feeling!
)Kaleb
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Cem, if you were the one making all these cruel remarks to me, I would be absolutely devastated. This is beauty. A beautiful poem.
Grumpy
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Grumpy -_ There's no way in the world that you or anyone else can please everyone. If you let that one person gnaw at you, it will affect your performance, vindicating your nemesis. Ignore this anonymous critic and write. -_ Dolma
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a beautiful, picturesque poem. ms
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