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Poem Number 14676
Morphine Dream -jeffh
Commentary:
A morphine dream
On a mountain of euphoria
Restless leaves rustle
Through electric air
Dances with moonbeams
In starlit ballrooms
Daybreak-
A kaleidoscope of color
Passionate and warm
Wakes the world
To its bold embrace
Cozy below the ozone blue
Mirage of day
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Amazing abstract description of a concrete natural event. About your comment under poem # 14656, it's true you have a long way to go, to be a good someone else. To be a good poet, Jeff style, you're already there! Just write. -- Moe
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Thanks ,Moe, for you comments. Very nice of you to say. Thank you for your consideration of my poem. -jeffh
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I agree with Moe exactly! On both aspects!
)Kaleb
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