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Poem Number 14597
tonight
you kiss me slow
teasing .. teasing ...
leaving me gasping ...
thirsty .. thirsty ...
wanting to forge
my body to yours ...
you & i ...
alone at home
our voices echoed
against the walls ...
eavesdropping to our urgency
but we don't care ...
time becomes our slave ...
we come out of hiding
... let go of our embrace
... detangling our legs apart
when we choose to ...
sluggishly stretching ...
like little kittens
basking in contentment
leaving behind ....
pillows on the floor ...
clothes carelessly thrown in places
territorial marks from the night passed
starting a new day ...
with a shared cup of coffee
& sunday morning paper ...
a toast
to more nights like this!
Commentary:
I love this! What treasures - nights like that! You word it well! R.J.G.
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"steamy", good job of writing.~ audee
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Viva nights like that. cem
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