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Poem Number 14455
Rainy days
I'm blue in so many ways
Without sun


Commentary:
Through this spatterd streaky pain,
lies the sodden colosus of red brick mire;
where the flatuent, tin can charriots,
champion the stokers of societies fire.
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The blinkerd vision of the suited rat
seeks ways to feed his bloated God,
and Orwell's proles, the latent hope,
wish only to go where others have trod.
...
-Scott-
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Excuse my manipulation of tense with 'trod', I just could not
find a suitable rhyme so I cheated!-Scott.
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It's allowedl; called Poetic License. You get it with your Driver's License! - Herman
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some choice lines in there Scott, i really like this one...fallon
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