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Poem Number 13058
I walk the line between the night and down the shadow through the day, my thought's are empty, callow body cast astray, but my mind keeps on as I am left behind to watch the dewdrops through my finger
---Skye , Vancouver WA
melt away
---Skye , Vancouver WA
Looks like I've lost my mind.
---Anonymous


Commentary:
it's like being inside some dream, I'm not sure I'd like to experience seeing myself melt away like that. Clever how you painted it. 'a'
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