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add
---Anonymous
to me slowly
---Anonymous
your words
---Anonymous
stack them high
---Anonymous
one brick
---Anonymous
at a time
---Anonymous
The
---Cor
trick to
---Cor
poetry is in
---Cor
the base, robust
---Cor
strong foundation
---Cor
to support the weight
---Cor
of crushing truths
---Cor
and heavy abstracts
---Cor
but still allow for movement
---Anonymous
and flow and beauty
---Anonymous
and uglyness
---Anonymous
Can I leave a little colour
---:-)
as I trail my rainbow
---:-)
dust across your words
---:-)
just to show I made a visit
---:-)
and slowly absorbed your words
---:-)
into my high rise dream
---Anonymous
where eagles fly
---Anonymous
and sometimes nest in the towers
---Anonymous
and into the moat below
---Anonymous
where the dragons
---Anonymous
whisper their
---Anonymous
pyroword poesy
---Anonymous
over a yellow brick road
---Anonymous
to climb a steep ladder
---.
part the veil of midnight sky
---.
and shake loose a fall
---fallon
of gold-green scale
---fallon
like leaves of aspen tumbling
---fallon
each enscribed with secret sign
---fallon
to be set as a seal
---fallon
on each ruddy brick
---fallon
which build this babbling tower
---fallon
one word at a time
---Anonymous
one thought after another until
---SMH
it all overflows and comes tumbling down
---Anonymous
into your heart where the secrets lie
---Anonymous
that only you know that this tower will...
---Anonymous
never die
---Stephanie, Pinehurst, NC


Commentary:
a little interaction, anyone?
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Who's next?
~~Cor~~
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whoops! got distracted, line 20 would be better as ---
'dust across your bricks'
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this one's going to be great...good how the words "add to me slowly" start off short and then build up, like tension.....-Melissa
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pyroword poesy...ouch :)
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is that an 'acid word' posy?
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lol, oh that is humorous
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I mean the babbling tower, lol.
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This sure turned out well...
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and still it continues
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