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Poem Number 11677
Wish I could grow a bonsai tree - one big enough to sit under...
and shade my enormous dreams in fantasy's fragrance
with you beside me in our own little earthenware world.


Commentary:
Easy -- if you're an elf!
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Bought my hubby a bonsai tree the other day...i was thinking how serene those little statues seem to be sitting underneath... how the tree, that takes years of sculpting is much like the knowledge of the ages - designed by life's scissors...ANYWAY, enough of my thoughts on the matter, anybody care to share their thoughts on the subject? add to?
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wouldn't dare add on. it is perfect. kind of takes on the quality of a zen koan...fallon
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does a dog have Buddha-nature?

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my nickname,one of them,is zendog.so the answer is yes,maybe,no.dt
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mu

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mu?? only a fool would say that, Joshu!!
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20 years forging keys
from others' metal,
a million locks,
a million possible keys...
in desperation one day
I gently pushed the door
and it swung open:
it was never locked.
~m
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only a barbarian would call Joshu a fool! give me your poetry....there, down the well! Ah, so.
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even Joshu called Joshu a fool, and you know it :))!!
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I really like this one -- great work! ~Serif
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By the way, that refers to the poem. ~Serif
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