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Poem Number 11646
Through all of the confusion,
chaos amass
I remain.
Like an optical illusion
seen through cloud of gas
Yet I restrain.
What can I do
but put pen in hand?
Who can stop the words
raging through all the land?
Through all of the division
made in the near past
I remain.
It all draws to conclusion
these words will be my last
yet I restrain.
Because I like to talk and write
because I can't still the uge inside of me
because I am strong in spirit
because I am not dead yet!


Commentary:
Thought I would try to start a little interactive.
Anyone want to play??
~~Corwin Grayswindyr~~
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Cor, you are a gas, a noble one...fallon
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Guess I walked right into that one, didn't I.
LOL.
~Cor~
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SUPPOSED to be interactive..sorry guys...I guess I'm a little impatient.
~~Cor~~
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Don't worry cor, the result was well worth the wait (or lack of). I feel the same -- as long as there is breath in my body and an idea in my head, I will write, and no matter if I say I won't return to this site to read or share poems, it inadvertently sucks me back. I am hooked on writing and reading other's work, no matter what war rages here.
Linda
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Linda=(lin)??
~Cor~
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Sorry to disappoint Cor. I hate being called lin, so it can't be me.
LinDA
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Lin DUH
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Very mature, anon, very mature.
Linda
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What?

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Nice.
- JEM

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