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Poem Number 11626
He's been eating garlic & he's asking me to dance!
well I'll have to be polite, I hope he's not looking for romance
I know it could be awful, but I guess I'll take that chance
But one thing's for certain: he ain't getting in my pants!
I'll have to take a breather if he asks to dance some more
but then he's quite light on his feet as we swirl around the floor
oh my gosh they're clapping & calling for an encore
wonder if they notice me running for the door!
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Well that was fun as we two raced to place a line
but I thought maybe I'd had too much wine
when I saw the words come up were different to mine
No need to apologise it worked out just fine!
just taking a moment to mention
it sort of changed my rhyme intention
no problem, as at the moment I have word 'retention'!
If I can get away with that explanation invention!
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Glad you're not mad
At the lines I did add
It would make me sad
If you thought I was a cad!
lw I think you are lovely
I find your wit bright & bubbly
sort of warm & cuddly
even though i'm getting mudly
Commentary:
you were quick lw you were in there as it was coming hot off the press, it was funny to see different lines coming up other than what I had printed , it was fun while it lasted, (laughing).
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hope you didn't mind, a, those lines just popped into my head as i saw your lines coming up --lw
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not at all . i loved it! a
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I was just messing around....add some more if you like! a
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"brave" anon continues to close poems, which his Royal Lowness does not like, such as # 11600, 11599, etc. He is continuing his Poetic Cleansing of this site, to match his Serbian countrymen's Ethnic Cleansing of Kosovo. Disruptive behavior has been filed. His type only understand NATO. - Orbie
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by the way, i love using the word "cad", it reminds me of watching "underdog" as a kid! --lw
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11600 was NOT a poem.
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ANON, go away. Nobody here likes you. Leave. Scram. -Ghost-
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take no notice of anon, he is wasting his breath in here!!! he is unknown...so don't recognise him to exist... was that the wind in the leaves? yes, I think it was!!! a
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oh! ...a bit slow but the penny drops!!! a
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a, i was wondering if you would be interested in exchanging e-mail? if so, you can e-mail me at leew261@webmail.bellsouth.net. if not, that's okay too -lw
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