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Poem Number 11618
i dont have a best friend, nor any real friends outside of family, dont see them much. guys at work arent friends really, just coworkers. i dont trust "friends" anymore. great that i've got this site.
its fun to visit here once a day. its sorta like giving a friend a call.


Commentary:
not feeling real good right now. dt
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dt, i've got loads of "friends" and not one among them gives and honest damn about a poem. The only best friend i ever had took his own life. At least he thought that it was his own. That was 16 years ago. He would have read my poem and so would you. That is why i come here. i am greatful that you do too...fallon
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dt, I don't have a best friend either, never have had one. I really look forward to your visits here. The idea of you shooting your computer with your gun the other day when all that crazy stuff was going on, had me laughing to myself for days. I hope your feeling better soon. ~sal
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Dt your words are so personable ---In poetry we shed our sense of urgency that usually comes with a relationship. We write to clear our souls of all the clutter. As I become more a part of poetry and this page, I find I dont visit any other web site just this one. The bonds that come with acceptance and sharing your soul is like making friends. Atleast with people that are open minded enough to read and comment In a positive manner ----whether the reader likes or dislikes the poem. Thanks for what you wrote up top and keep up the wonderful poetry ------i look forward to it every day............................Peacefrog
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Here we go again, same song different tune, boy can he play people! db
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Got that right db, no matter how deep or much crap dt pulls himself out of, he always comes out smelling like a rose. Maybe he's related to Bill Clinton! Lil
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Once a week, let's all bathe in love and forgiveness; watch muddy brain water drain down the cesspool of humanity; then meet each other with a clean, fragrant soul. Doctors say, we'll live longer too. =- Farley
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dt , it is sad to see you so down & forlorn, you've faltered & stumbled into a flat patch & the page you've opened just seems a bit dull & grey.
You just need some color to give yourself a 'lift',so dip your pen into a rainbow & pen a few lines, if it is still lacking, then dip the pen again, until you create enough color & warmth, to comfort your chilled soul.
For buried in you are gem stones of beautiful ray & hue. You just need to probe & excavate to find the hidden jewels. Build yourself a cluster to bring you back to "cheer".
Don't let the noise of the crowd drown your inspiration, for not all have ears to hear.
Please dt, take your pen & create a rainbow for you & me & all of the clan in here to see.
There dt see what you did, even when you are down? ....You inspired me to put pen to paper too!
(smile)
Audee.
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It doesn't really matter that I've not written it well, but it's better than being just negative, it's having a go I think! Audee.
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I think you need a pet.
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good morning cheer from you all is a great thing before i wrap this monkey in clothes and send him out to work. i'm to intense for some and way to calm for others. i give myself to completely when i find someone who honestly cares to put there time in with my own and spend some time just
being a friend. i guess i drive people away with my insistence on honesty
in words. its not easy right now to be single either. i cant write my deepest here right now, it goes a lil slow and would surely get me snipped, as this will i am sure. then i get angry and hurt this place for all. thanks for the words of wisdom all, i really truley ascended some from your thoughts. dt
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dt learn to relax a little, one can be honest without having to be so intense. Try a smile, then a laugh & let the frown go! A.
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whinge, whinge, whinge, it isn't a popular trait
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