UNDERTOW
just before the rising sun
light of day unknown
you were taken away my friend
easily distracted and stoned
Cut off from the world
Now you sit in a firey hole
Cut off from the world
Now you sink in a firey hole
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UNDERTOW
so break on free
UNDERTOW
your minds your disease
UNDERTOW
fly from this unborn painted sky
UNDERTOW
they will never take us undertow
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lets crawl out to the sea
lets find our hidden minds
yesterday was the first breath
waves wash up lost time
Cut off from the world
they will never break our soul
Cut off from the world
they will never break our soul
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UNDERTOW
let our silence speak
UNDERTOW
your minds your disease
UNDERTOW
fly from this unborn painted sky
UNDERTOW
they will never take us undertow
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Take your last walk with love and death
The storm wont take us alive this time
were to crazy
were to crazy
Undertowed swallowed and sold like the slaves to the fire
they wont take us alive this time
were to crazy
were to crazy
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................................our vice will never take us UNDERTOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Peacefrog

Fascinating, unique, strong, intriguing, and beautifully written, I'm going to keep this one in my file of favorites, to enjoy year after year. R.J.G.
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Peacefrog, i keep coming back to this one, not knowing what to say. it is so full of paranoia and has broad application. it speaks to addiction, obsession, depression, maybe even to autism among other forms of suffering. quite amazing!...fallon
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Hot, flaming, inspiring verse -- terrific! ~Serif
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A very vivid and powerful execution of letters arranged in a manner that seems to resembe a spoken tongue of the ancient kaloohoo tribe of pluto... just joking. I liked it very much. Markaria
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Peacefrog - glad to see you are still writing here - this poem reminded me of a song, was it written as one?
Linda