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Poem Number 11510
How much time is there
---Cooker
I feel the familiar fear
---Cooker
Does anyone care
---Cooker
Will they see me here
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Will they see what I am doing
---Anonymous
Will they think that it's important
---Cooker
Will they want what I am hewing
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With gold I could be scintilant
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Why should I care
---LJ
If they see me there
---LJ
Time is never ending
---LJ
Fear is a new beginning
---LJ
~
---Anonymous
I cannot buy your belief
---LJ
But I can influence it
---LJ
Here I am for you to see
---LJ
No longer will I lurk
---Lady_Jazmin
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---Anonymous
I see your caring in bas-relief
---Cooker
I wanted to come so I could see
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Knowing you care is sure a relief
---Cooker
but I am here cause I choose to be
---Cooker
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I once was there! I'm no jerk
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No one said blend with me I'll submit
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So I came here and got to work
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Now in bas-relief my needs transmit
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I need you to see what I am hewing
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I need you to want what I am doing
---Cooker
I need you to think I'm important
---Cooker
I would do most anything
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I might even try to be tolerant
---Cooker
So what if the baseness of my relief is seen
---Cooker
I see you there and know you care
---Cooker
~
---Cooker


Commentary:
Feel free to add. This really needs something. ~Cooker
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I hope what I added is ok. I really felt this one. *Lady_Jazmin*
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Thanks Jaz this was just a trivial rhyme till you cared! ~Cooker
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