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Poem Number 11510
How much time is there
I feel the familiar fear
Does anyone care
Will they see me here
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Will they see what I am doing
Will they think that it's important
Will they want what I am hewing
With gold I could be scintilant
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Why should I care
If they see me there
Time is never ending
Fear is a new beginning
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I cannot buy your belief
But I can influence it
Here I am for you to see
No longer will I lurk
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I see your caring in bas-relief
I wanted to come so I could see
Knowing you care is sure a relief
but I am here cause I choose to be
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I once was there! I'm no jerk
No one said blend with me I'll submit
So I came here and got to work
Now in bas-relief my needs transmit
I need you to see what I am hewing
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I need you to want what I am doing
I need you to think I'm important
I would do most anything
I might even try to be tolerant
So what if the baseness of my relief is seen
I see you there and know you care
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Commentary:
Feel free to add. This really needs something. ~Cooker
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I hope what I added is ok. I really felt this one. *Lady_Jazmin*
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Thanks Jaz this was just a trivial rhyme till you cared! ~Cooker
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