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Poem Number 11445
I hated it, just hated it when she had her period
It was a barrier to romance and she was cranky
She called it "the curse" and I agreed with her
Today she told me, it has been well over two months
Your only sixteen I told her, maybe it's just irregular
I have always been on time she say and cries
Tomorrow we will go to walmart and buy one of those kits
Please God, let her get her period tonight!
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too young to be a daddy
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She is... I'm to sick to write more...this is the first place I've shared it with...guess i'm in for hearing lots of comments like the ones below
I do believe in God...abortion is out of the question...gotta go look for a J.O.B....{Scream}


Commentary:
Chilling...fallon
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You play, you pay....and so does the baby..your families...your future
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Wow man, bet you get no sleep tonight. That sucks. Is there gonna be a sequel poem?
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Don't count on it-you're probably headed for fatherhood.Ever heard of birth control or abstinence? Tne word "no" is the best birth control and it's free.
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Geeeeeeeeeeez
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oh boy.....hope this is just a poem?...or a hard reality?...good luck man.
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This certainly has the effect of stirring emotion, empathy. sm
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If you are feeling like that, imagine how she must be feeling...
lin
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if this is a poem of reality--not much to be said at this point--to late for reason--your poem might reach someone else & open their eyes--window watcher
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The real victims in these cases are the babies. They are either killed/aborted or born unwanted. The true victim is also the only true innocent, the only one worthy of my tears.
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Too young? Time to grow up quick then.
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You didn't think you were to young to use your daddy making equipment! Next time think with your brain!
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If it turns out she isn't, will you make the same mistake again? Probably. +Been there.
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Just remember, folks. She played a part in this too. -Hans
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Yes, but she didn't post a poem about it at AHA! POETRY!
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I could cry for everyone in this sitch...if this is real, please listen to that Ben Folds Five song "Brick"...it's about abortion. I'm not advocating abortion, just think the song might be true to your feelings.
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Lordy, don't get me started here! Why do you call on God for your beck and call now? You didn't care what he wanted before. Young man, I hope for all your sakes she isn't either but if she is turn to God and he will lead you thru this because you have more to think of than yourself! Seek out help! Almost any minister will counsel you. ~Tanya
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Well, right or wrong, today's the day.
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so was yesterday, remember?
x
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Nice Period Poem. Period! =- Claude
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Tanya ~ Isn't it pointless to see a minister, when God is a fiction of a christian's imagination. ~ Carmina
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In YOUR opinion Carmina, not MINE! You do not uphold that there is a God and I certainly do not uphold your atheistic view! I don't debate the reality of my creator. Guess when our life is over we will find out who is right. The young man mentioned God in his poem in the last line "Please God", almost as if a prayer, so he evidently DOES believe there is a God and so not wanting to see them struggle thru this alone I advised him to seek help in the place I thought best. This may just be a poem, no more no less, then again it may be a very difficult time in someones life they have to get thru and in my opinion ministers can be very helpful. He certainly has the choice of taking or leaving that advise. ~Tanya
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Even then, Carmina, it IS part of the job of a minister to give counsel.
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Saint -{}- Eregwir, the all knowing,speaks!
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Thank you, anon, but that's -{ }- ... get it right.
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it represents a big open mouth.
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No wonder you have to sign with an X, you have nothing intelligent to say.
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you lack even the courage of a pseudonym
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Nearing the end of all this "commentary" comes an argument?
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",states the anonymouse backseat driver.
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be honest, this is just a bit of light relief in comparison to the hateful judgements that precede it.
christians? your jesus would weep at these words. you ought to be ashamed of yourselves.
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