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Poem Number 11439
A Call to Action: On the Road of Life

I stand at the ready, a field of dreams
to plunge into the quiet streams
why stand there a-gawking? Arise! Arise!
What matter how per'lous the journey seems?
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I be not contented to lie here a-dreaming
while 'round and about me all life is a-streaming!
Why not rush in, and take the prize?
Could the dangers, perhaps, be merely a seeming?
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NO there so fun danger is da bomb!!
IT EXCITES MY MIND AND SOUL.FEELS ME UP WITH PASSION AND LOVE PUTS MY MIND AT EASE
MAKES ME BRAKE DOWN ON MY KNEES


Commentary:
this is like a shot of adrenalin. makes me want to stand up and conquer all! nicely done...ms
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like this too--don't let life pass you by--dive in--it's worth the risk--good job!--window watcher
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anon disruptor (last 3 lines): If you continue your destructive efforts on this site, you may be shut out of this spot, and sent packing into cyberspace. -_ Gordita
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