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Poem Number 11430
WINDOW WATCHER BIRTHDAY INTERACTIVE
---Merkel

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Amidst the clamor of the crowd
---Anonymous
Rings a voice so true
---Anonymous
Without him on the poetry page
---Anonymous
We wouldn't know what to do.
---Anonymous
~
---Anonymous
Who's lookin' through my window pane
---Anonymous
Why it's that guy with the funny name.
---Anonymous
He'll always tell you what he thinks,
---Anonymous
Even if he thinks it stinks!
---Anonymous
~
---Anonymous
Who is that silly peeping Tom
----{ }- Eregwir
who's voice rings out in verse and song?
----{ }- Eregwir
with so many candles burning, the clown,
----{ }- Eregwir
it's a wonder his house isn't burning down!
----{ }- Eregwir
~
---Anonymous
I can almost see that dimple
---Anonymous
as he grins from ear to ear
---Anonymous
because I'm gonna tell him to imagine
---Anonymous
us singing happy birthday...by all the jokers here!
---JimT
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---Anonymous
Won't bar you from my window
---Anonymous
miss you when you're not looking in
---Anonymous
you always leave a lighted candle
---Anonymous
Message from a friend
---Anonymous
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---Anonymous
A cool dude
---Anonymous
With a "together" life
---Anonymous
Has something missing though
---Anonymous
Let's help the dude find a wife!
---Anonymous
~
---Anonymous
For he's a jolly good voyeur
---fallon
He'll spy you inside your foyer
---fallon
No one could be any coyer
---fallon
That, nobody can deny!
---fallon
If my words could be flowers
---Tanya
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---Anonymous
If my words could be flowers
---Tanya
My AHA friend
---Tanya
I would speak you a garden full
---Tanya
Where they'd grow without end!
---Tanya
~
---Anonymous
When in the shadows
---Cor
the light doth stray
---Cor
Window Watcher stalks
---Cor
his prey.
---Cor
But I can see him so
---Cor
I say.
---Cor
Window Watcher-
---Cor
Happy B-day!
---Corwin Grayswindyr
`
---Anonymous
~
---Anonymous
Happy Birthday to window washer or was it
---Anonymous
window wiper or was that widow watcher
---the twins
or was that window waxer or winter watcher
---Anonymous
Oh, window watcher...have the best!
---the twins
~
---Anonymous
Friends world wide
---Anonymous
And all you get for your birthday
---Anonymous


Commentary:
Who can give us a good First Verse, to set the theme? :- Merkel
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Guilty of first verse. Sorry, it's early...lol~nr
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So what rhymes with "watcher"...lol?~nr
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So what rhymes with "watcher"...lol?~nr
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O.K...Guilty of second verse too...~nr
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good grief & oh my goodness--i just now scrolled down this far & almost fell off my chair--thanks guys--my own poem--i love it---best present i've been given!!!!!--he-he-he on the candles--this definitely goes in my "keeper" folder!---thanks for making me smile :)--window watcher
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Forget it, Nightrider -- yer not takin' the blame for verse three!
-{ }-
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Didn't know
that is was
that day
but happy on ya Watcher
and many many
Happy
more......jake
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Verse six; all in good will...fallon
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oops, i got bumped into seventh spot while typing...fallon
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Fallon, I am so sorry I added my line to your stanza! I forgot to add the squiggle before I started! Leave it to me to screw Up the poem! Hope you and WW forgive me! WW, I wish you many blessings on your birthday and want to say I appreciate you. Your faith in God and your caring attitude always shine thru. You seem to be a special young man used of God! God Bless you! Tanya
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Hope I didn't ruing your b-day present WW.
The only thing I could think of right of the top
of the 'ol noggin.
pretty corny though, I must admit.:)
~~Cor~~
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Loved the lines by "The twins"...~nr
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this is the greatest!--a masterpiece!--if i wouldn't get clobbered with a bunch of rotten tomatoes i'd give it a +10(couldn't resist that)--seriously--thanks again all--he-he-eh--some of you outdid yourselves--i'm still laughing---not a bit corney--loved it all--the serious & funny-----#4--i did envision the song--it was heavenly--the only one i have a slight problem with (he-he-he) is #6--think i'd like to find my own wife so put the add on hold------this was very special everyone--that you would have the thought & take the time to do this for me is overwhelming--careful or i'll be crying happy tears--oh well---WW
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WW :: For the record, we did not write the above stanza by "the twins"; though we wish you happy birthday. We were gonna propose to you, but we can't resolve a legal question: Is marryimg two identical twins considered bigamy; OR just marriage to one woman, who is double regular size? :: Delia & Sophia (the twins)
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twins--the real ones--if you read this--you didn't?--very strange!--wonder who did?--get this--part of my poem has dissappeared too!--this site gets crazier all the time!----he-he-he--thanks for the proposal but gotta go with question #1 as the answer-- :( --my loss!-- better find some twin guys to marry & keep me out of jail--thanks for the wishes & the laugh!--window watcher
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