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Poem Number 11385
EVEN WITH THE WINDS OF NIGHT
MY FIRE WILL NOT COOL,
THOUGH I COLD SHOWER, DO EVERYTHING RIGHT,
I'M STILL A SEX-STARVED FOOL.
I READ LOTS OF BORING BOOKS,
GO TO THE GYM EVERY DAY
BUT I'M A LOST SOUL,
LOOKING FOR A LAY.
GUESS I'LL HAVE TO WAIT 'TIL I'M EIGHTY OR SO,
FOR MY GLANDS TO QUIET DOWN,
BUT MATEY THIS I KNOW,
I'LL BE WATCHING EVERY GIRL IN TOWN.
hey, im a guy, what do you expect?
When I get smacked I well not regret
THAT SEXUAL FEELING THAT I WILL GET,
WHEN SHE HITS ME I WILL LAY HER DOWN
AND FUCK HER IN FRONT OF THE ENTIRE TOWN!!!
AND ALL THE MEN WILL WHIP THEIR DICKS OUT.
AND HAVE A MASTURBATION BOUT.
THEN WE WILL ALL HAVE OUR TURN,
TO MAKE HER LESSON BE THE ERROR SHE LEARNED....
Commentary:
Will you hurry up and finish this poem!
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MISS PRISS FINISHED THIS POEM. YOU'D NEVER GUESS!!!! :)
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Maybe you would guess-I'm usually here in my Jim-jams.:^)
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Well, I asked for it, didn't I?
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Yes, and this has to stay posted for 2 wk.s. Poetry monitor
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eew! That was nice to know. I don't think you should be sharing your sex life with the whole world!!!! Once again, eew. Good god, how can you be so open? You're either a lesbo, or a guy with no respect. lol! that poem is funny. jeese. lol. I'm sending it to people, for your sake. You should have thought of the conciquences. lol gain. goot bye.
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true feelings,,isn't that what poetry is about,,this I like!I am a women and I like it because in poetry you shouldn't have to hide anything
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Oh, how I dream of such a man. But alas nothing is simple anymore; seems like every guy I meet ends up wanting a relationship . . . why? Seriously. someone tell me, why? So much hassle, heartache, throwing of priceless valuables. Whatever happened to good ol' one night stands?
~spirit
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Well, people don't smoke and throw trash on the road anymore either. Everything changes. Maybe in 20 years or so your lifestyle will return. (after it's too late, right?)
~nr
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Actually, it is my (albeit unsolicited) opinion that poetry is all about anything you want it to be -- language, expression, life, death, happiness, etc, etc, ad nauseum...-- not just 'feelings', whether true or no.
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i hate guys like this because they are only out for one thing. why can't more men want long term relationships with sex involved also instead of just a one night stand?
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I FIXED THE WHOLE SEX CRAZED THING LET ME TELL YOU NOW NO ONE WILL WANNA READ THIS SICK SICK POEM!!!!
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