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Poem Number 10875
raises his hands in talking to you,
they come crashing down,
synchronized with that sadness that falls,
how far from good to melt back into the past,
how far from the past to melt back into this night
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Three points. Where is the follow-through?... and what a way to ruin three starting lines.
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