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Poem Number 10836
Sliver
Moon slicing
Through black silk.
A pin-feather peekhole
To another world reminding
Me of the keyhole view I have
Of this entire chaotic life swirling
Me in dizzy circles desperately
Seeking grace and wisdom
Through such a tiny
Perspective
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R.J.G.


Commentary:
it makes us all seem so small...doesn't it...well said...m.e.
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R.J.G. I've noticed several of your latest poems have very distinctive visible shapes. I recall a sail and this in the form of an arrowhead as I see it...I like this very much.It gives another dimension to a very good poems...........Jake
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R.J.G., i like this too. it's like watching ourselves from a different dimension...ms
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