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Poem Number 10795
thoughts
about my predicament
look like
a 3D puzzle ....
pieces nothing less than
10,000
with no option to complain
environment?
conditions?
tolerable, fair ...
nothing but everywhere


Commentary:
Beautiful way to put a feeling I understand well! Yes, a 3D puzzle with impossible number of pieces. Excellently worded! R.J.G.
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RJG .. thanks =o) this is actually incomplete but i can't seem to get it back on track so, if there's anybody who'd like to play with this one, please do ... have a good day all!!! Drm
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like it as is--the 3-d puzzle--impossible to figure out-- tells all about your predicament--& boy don't we all feel like that sometimes about life's messes--great description--window watcher
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the poem being unfinished, as you say, seems to fit the theme...like this..m.e.
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thanks, WW! want my predicament? =p just thought i offer. m.e. -- hmm ... i guess i didn't see it that way. thanks =o) Drm
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