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Poem Number 10712
Give me another credit card, this one is all maxed out
Shopping, shopping, things, things, things
That's what life is all about
Until you get the next card
off to the mall you go
when it comes to shopping you never say no
especially for the big booty hoes
the card can't fill it but it fills your thrills


Commentary:
no--that's not what life is all about & if you think so you are missing so much!--also sounds like the last thing you need is another credit card--sounds like trouble for you--then again i'm probably being much to serious--this was probably written in lighthearted fun--window watcher
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cant leave anything well enough alone, can you window watcher?
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forgive me if i don't quite grasp the meaning of your comment--have i insulted you in some way?--WW
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I agree with WW. Material things are not what is important or buy you happiness. The old saying "The best things in life are free" are true! dk
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is true. dk
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I have never maxed out a credit card in my life, that is stupid with all the interest they charge, besides I just beg my boyfriend for it if I can't live without it. Works every time!
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Sure anon, HIS credit cards are probably maxed out!
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Not only do you have bad credit, your poem is bad. My advice to you is "set your sight on eternal treasures instead of earthly pleasures! And, please, take a writing course -- when you can afford it.
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Not only do you have bad credit, your poem is bad. My advice to you is "set your sight on eternal treasures instead of earthly pleasures! And, please, take a writing course -- when you can afford it.
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Not only do you have bad credit, your poem is bad. My advice to you is "seek eternal treasures instead of earthly pleasures -- then take a writing course -- if you can afford it. (pay with cash) Granny
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