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Poem Number 10707
sink the silver sliver deep
down through the darkened drops of life
and leave it resting in its sheathe
a calling card of raged desire
when it comes to shopping you never say no
Commentary:
interesting--pondering--window watcher
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I keep seeing such good ideas in all these collective poems but always end up wishing for better rythm.; more worked-at craftiness and more flowing texture.
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it's deep yet it is something to ponder coz it's part of reality
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it's deep yet it is something to ponder coz it's part of reality
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