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Poem Number 10515
Doves cooing on ledge.
Inside, virgin lovers watch.
Valentine's Love Stage.

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^^ 5-7-5 Haiku ^^


Commentary:
Happy St. Valentine's Day! May you all love--without addiction. == Tom
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right on tom--window watcher
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ww == The lovers were learning from the birds. Sorry I could not fit the bees in the 3 lines. Hope you had a loving Valentine's Day. == Tom
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Nice Tom! *mf*
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mf == Your positive comment is gratifying. Feedback, positive or negative, can be helpful to the poet. == Tom
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Tom, regarding your comment to WW, don't really need to add
the bees, using the doves, symbols of "peace", is a very sweet
image. *mf* (mayflower)
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tom--ditto *mf*--birds were perfect!--i did have a loving valentine's day--with my family whom i love very much--hope you had a loving one too tom--WW
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