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Poem Number 10104
Hey groundhog, stick your head out!
I'm tired of snow and slush;
this phlegm of Old Man Winter.
Quit taking all your sweet time,
waiting for your T.V. day!
Meantime, we shiver in boots.
Damn your stupid cameras!
Pop out now; tell the Snow Bum
to pack up and scram early!
What? "No can do" ? You pig!
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(End of Poem -- Not Winter!)
Commentary:
A few months ago everyone was screaming because it was too hot!
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you didn't hear that mr. groundhog--no they didn't call you a pig--no please don't keep your head in longer for spite--now author aren't you ashamed--go easy on that poor groundhog---please--window watcher
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Hey man that's right or we gonna call Dr. Dolittle.
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LMAO at that movie. dave
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WW, Dave, anons--I guess if I don't apologise to that groundhog, we're in for a loooooong winter! Thought I would lighten up the atmosphere. We've had a lot on our minds recently. -- Jim/SP
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cute makes me wish summer was here (I never complain about it being to hot) miss camping and boating with my family. Naa
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thanks for makin it right with the groundhog jim/sp---winter has already been to looooooong for me--enjoyed your poem--WW
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Jim/SP, thanks for another fine taste of your lightheartedness. feels good...ms
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this is pretty funny esp. the reference to t.v. cameras.smc
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Naa, WW, ms, smc -- Real pleased poem gave you some mid-winter smiles, as practice for the inevitable Spring (hear that Groundhog?!). -- Jim/SP
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Guess I'm the only one here who likes winter!! It is the summer heat that I don't like. I don't "do" summer well!! :-) JFC
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JFC, i was beginning to think i'm alone in my love of winter, but now, you've come to save my day!...thanx! Jim?SP, you mighta made the little guy mad...whacha gonna do now? LOL! )) justme
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JFC, justme, and all ye masochists!--You all can have perenial winter, if you can bribe (with nuts?) the Groundhog in Pawnsatony (spelling?), Pennsylvania not pop out of the ground and decree the end of winter! I warn you; by cancelling Spring for ever, you will incur the furious wrath of Lovers everwhere! -- Jim/SP
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