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Teen Salon - One

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Poem Number 1962

When you whisper sweet words of love in my ear
i begin to vomit projectilly
big chunks of hearts & flowers
Next time warn me: Love is tough to digest
yea that
whatev this is a lame chatroom
but thelove will remain from me to you
and live for ever and ever
Love sick is what they say this is
who knew it could be so hard?
So get out of my way!
But do it gently.
or I'll be forced to run u over with my humonges feet
But, no matter what, you make me feel complete.
Wherever I'am today or tomorrow
Just not today.
Call tommorow.
but the burden of pain, i will sorrow.
Sneeze on me, and I'll cry
I'm not sure why we're hesitating, but we are
,we are in love.
for time and all eternity.
for ever and ever babe.
Forever and always I shall love thee,
'Til the universe falls into a black ebiss and after
My soul will hold together with the promise of once again hearing your laughter.
i love you
What word are to be spoken. I love you can mean so much and so little at the same time.
Should "I love you" be taken so lightly?
If so I will hold you tightly
Letting my actions speak louder than words.
Let my love be witnessed by the trees, the skies, and birds

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