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Teen Salon - One

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Poem Number 1952

dont do it
I plead you
I'm on my knees
begging you not to do it.
if you do it you'll make me bleed
and its a blood you'll never see
Forever flowing in my damaged heart
and my heart is already weak.
weak from the wounds that you have already torn
with weapons I cannot see
"you said you loved me" she cried to me
hahaha thats so emo
just like little nemo
And yet you still hurt me
and yet you are still in my heart
and till this day
why can't we just let this be
please just love me for me
for i am b\

Commentary:
I like what you added Joe......Crystal

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