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Poem Number 190

I can't remember my dreams because I keep falling asleep
but my body have a glimpse of each journey I went throug
I always wake up wondering
will I escape again tomorrow .
or die tonight in your arms
Commentary:
My life's been dull. I just don't have much to say right now, but it's not important. More or less nothing seems worth thinking about.
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I just don't have much to say right now. Pretty much nothing seems worth doing. My mind is like an empty room. I haven't gotten anything done these days. What can I say?
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