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Poem Number 7638

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If forty is wisdom and midlife has hit
then fifty is closer a goal one must set
For if i can make it to sixty one day
shouldnt I be wiser and gray
Only now the strands do appear
and they`re getting more each year
Come gray come white just dont stop commin
cuz thats the day my heart stops runnin
I`ve outlived many who`re still in spirit
and soon I,too, will reach my limit
Now i`ll wait for that very day
when i die and HE heres me pray!!.........classic38
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