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Haiku - Five

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Poem Number 3472

Diversity
lets a hundred flowers bloom
the start of friendships
Commentary:
Heaven's light shining
Gently on different roads
Leading us to God
...Bill
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This is giving me goosebumps. I have a son we call BR whose buisiness name is Bill and he could have written this Haiku. I love the title you worked from Bill and I love the power of the word 'gently' as you used it here. Wonderful. LJ from ID
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I appreciate your comments. My name is William Roberts and I live in New Hampshire. I used to think that there was only one narrow road leading to God. As this poem shows, my concepts have changed.
...Bill
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