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Poem Number 964

She dances in the
Garden, skirt swirling on her
Dress made of moonlight
Commentary:
Whimsical with its touch of magic. Beautiful. PG
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Thanks - I was walking on the beach yesterday and for some reason, this came to me.
~O~ Coyote Moon ~O~

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Shades of Lavender about your head Coyote, I enjoyed
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Thank you. This is one of the only haiku I've wrote that wasn't just out and out goofy. Like the ones about my friend John Boy. I think I saw him driving down my street today, wearing that blue and white Hawaiian shirt of his and smoking a cigarette. Thing is, he lives two towns over in the next county, so I don't know why he was in my neck of the woods. But it must have been him. I'd know that shirt anywhere.
~O~ Coyote ~O~

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