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Poem Number 416

then, you skipped a stone
ripples spread and touched my heart
at the waters edge
Commentary:
Deep and lovely Haiku, Marleen. I love your work. It is well wrought. Lida Jo
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thanks for your kind words.......i sort of swing between the spiritual and sentimental and depressed........take care marleen
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Lovely thoght and image. Has everything going for it.
Dend.
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glad you like it........much better to write haiku when I can't sleep than raiding the refrigerator............lol.......marleen
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