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Poem Number 3466

For light refreshments
Give me the taste of moonbeams
The fragrance of stars
Commentary:
yes it's better to stick with moonbeams and stars...that moonshine can kill you.
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BR, your imagery is sooooo fine! May I use this in my poetry class to illustrate images? I'll give you credit. This is an enviable poem, one of those, "OH, WHY can't I write like that????" poems. LJ from ID
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Lida Jo, you are welcome to use anything I write. I wish I could write well all the time. I wonder if Robert Frost (my favorite) ever had a dry spell?
...Bill (BR)
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BR, thank you so much! Yes, Mr. Frost had dry periods and occasionally I run across a poem of his that I consider not up there with his great stuff.
I do love your work! Lida Jo
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