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Poem Number 3461

Nature holds her breath
Autumn anticipation
Waiting for the snow
Commentary:
Nature will exhale any moment now here in Idaho. The season just turned last week. It was sudden and unmistakable. I love 'Autumn anticipation' and how you capped it with the waiting for snow. Excellent work, BR.
LJ from ID
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I'll tell you again that I'm glad to see you commenting again L.J. This year (2011) we got a huge snowstorm befor Halloween.
...BR
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It is a pleasure to come and see such quality poetry, BR. As you said elsewhere, this was a busy site once. Eritain and OptoMike, Da Red Queen, many others with wonderful talent. Would have loved a book of their Haiku's. Then went through a time of vulgarity but that didn't last too long. Such writings melt in the sunshine of true talent. It is so nice to be back among the Poets! I love your work, BR. Lida Jo from Idaho
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