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Poem Number 269

Creating love with you..
sweet masterpiece of motion
framed with joyful cries.
Commentary:
Liz: Blush. PG
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Nice work PG
Thanks! love and peace
liz de wiz
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Is it hot in here or is it just me? Thats the way I like it.......
opto
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I don't often comment on this type of poem, probably because I think I
shouldn't understand them but I do. But this one is understated, evoking
things not spoken, using well chosen images that do not blatt. It moves
close to elegance. Lida Jo
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