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Poem Number 1433

Broken promises
Like yesterdays trash, never
Seem to go away
let's stay friends, he said

Commentary:
hey m4r (1st three lines) I love it! and it is so true - great analogy...LM
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don't know where the last one came from,but thanks....m4r
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