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Poem Number 304

Silently.......sneaking.....
Secretively...towards her..."Gotcha"
Tickled child giggles.

Commentary:
I am hoping without offending the author that this poem isn't about Uncle Larry, who was jailed for molestation. ---z
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z::She's probably tickling Miniquiche5, 9, or 12. Sounds like a fun time before sleep.--Thing
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z::I'm also sorry you had an Uncle Larry.__Thing
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z: too many of my poems are about "Uncle Larry" and Grandpa Harry and Mother Dearest, thought I would take a break (per glimpsed formerly known as tom's commentary Haiku5) and write some shallow little ditties about life with my kiddos. Innocent tickles and hugs from Mommaquiche...Thing has it right. Morbidquiche shall return, she always does...LOL ~QuicheMarie, whose kids think that she is a lot of fun, despite her pessimistic nature...
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I once had an Uncle Larry;
Or should I say
He once had meee..
"Norwegian's Wood,"
(adapted for porn by ZiZi)
I didn't have an Uncle Larry per se, but any time a dirty old man is seen tickling a little kid, no matter what his intentions, my hackles raise a bit... ---z
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z---there is not dirty old man in this poem, just three innocent kids and their mom having fun....~Q~
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Okay, QM, sorry, my bad. Please forgive me, I have enough anonymous enemies to add the named to the list. ---z
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No enemy here ((Z))! I was just clearing any misunderstanding about this little poem up. I, too get very nervous when a dirty old man tickles a little kid. Been tickled myself, infact. ~QM~
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Hey, ALL::I'm glad to report that I see a lot of healing going on in
Haikuland. Keep up the good work. GrandmaThing
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