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Poem Number 1664

cherry blossoms fall
away from their mother tree
towards the white snow
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Commentary:
soft white snow
cherry blossoms fall
from the sky....alice
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mmm what colour are cherry blossoms? maybe:

soft pink snow
cherry blossoms fall
from the sky......alice
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Sounds nice.
Though I really wouldn't know the proper colour for cherry blossoms.
;)
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There is an old love song that says: "It's cherry pink and apple blossom white "
but I think it may depend on the type of fruit.--GrandmaThing--May you know love.
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cherry blossoms drop
like children into the snow
fragile pink on white
~m909
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love your poem m909..alice
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THIS POEM IS BEAUTIFUL

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THIS POEM IS BEAUTIFUL

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